6.26.2008

headline assignment

Bad:

Obama Slams McCain Nuke Plant Plans In Nevada

http://www.usnews.com/usnews/politics/bulletin/bulletin_080625.htm

The headline is too comprehensive and requires a second read. I would go with:

Obama: No to McCain's Nuclear Plant Proposal

Good:

Wrist Watch: Red Sox' Ortiz Needs More Time

Washington Post

David Ortiz' wrist has been in the news for a while and I like the play on wrist watch.

1 comment:

Klemko said...

http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/06/25/AR2008062503322.html

... forgot to put the link on the Washington Post story